When Cricket--a gifted inventor--steps out from his twin sister’s shadow and back into Lola’s life, she must finally reconcile a lifetime of feelings for the boy next door.
You remember my glowing, gushing, girly review for Anna And The French Kiss, right? If not, or if you need a refresher, here’s the gist of it; Omg St. Clair! *massive fangirl attack* It’s like…I can’t even…. JUST READ THIS BOOK!!! Lola is the companion novel to Anna, and I fully expected to go gaga over Cricket and Lola’s slow-burn romance to a similar degree that I did St. Clair and Anna’s.
That…didn’t happen.
Now I’ll fully admit that this book suffers significantly
for being in the shadow of its predecessor.
I probably judged it more harshly for that reason, expected more from
it, and ultimately had a more negative reaction to it than I would have had it
been a debut or completely unrelated novel.
But the fact remains that I was completely underwhelmed and unimpressed
by Lola And The Boy Next Door.
The biggest issue I have with this book is its
narrator. Lola is a spoiled brat, a liar
and a tease. She has a boyfriend at the
start of this novel who isn’t Cricket Bell (hello, repeated plot device!), but
when the boy she used to adore moves back to the house next to hers, things
begin to get a bit…complicated. And by
complicated I mean drawn out, predictable, and boring. Based off of the title alone, we know when we
open the first page who Lola’s “true lurve” is going to be by the end of the
book. I knew this, and as with Anna, I was okay with it. I expected the journey to be worth the
predictable ending. But it wasn’t. Lola immediately comes off as an immature
child who has no idea what real problems are, and has no idea that the entire
world doesn’t revolve around her and her kooky wardrobe. There were repeated instances in this book
when she would lie to her current boyfriend about Cricket, and then get all
whiny and mad when Max (plot-device boyfriend) called her out on it. I mean, really? Grow up, Lola! On top of that, she would simultaneously lead
poor nerdy-good-guy Cricket along on a string, like a replacement puppy sitting
outside of her door waiting for the current one to tinkle on Lola’s foot and be
kicked to the curb. Lola is the type of
girl I hate in real life, so to be stuck inside of her head for nearly 400
pages was torture.
Shitty MC aside, the romance in this book left a lot to be
desired. Within the first hundred pages,
Cricket confesses his undying love to Lola, so right off the bat we have half
of the romantic tension drained like a popped balloon. So we’re left with 300 pages of Lola’s lying,
whining, and internalizing, the whole time absolutely positive what her final
decision will be. There was no magic, no
doubt or passion propelling the story.
It was just flat.
Cricket himself isn’t so bad, but his insistence on Lola as
his future mate made me respect him a whole hell of a lot less. The dude really needed to grow a pair and
kick that girl to the side in pursuit of less emotionally unstable and more
loyal and honest girls. In fact, Cricket
is such an obvious good guy that the whole idea of him and Lola getting
together felt forced and unrealistic. There was little to no chemistry between
the two. Max, the other guy in Lola’s
life, is pretty darn awesome in my opinion.
He did call Lola on her bullshit, he didn’t let her lead him along, and
ultimately, he told her what she needed to hear – albeit in a rather douchey
way. Yet he’s supposed to be the “bad
guy” in the relationship by the end.
Puh-lease.
The actual writing is really good, though, and despite all
of the major flaws with the book it calls you back to read more. It’s rare when a book that I hate is so hard
to put down, but Lola And The Boy Next
Door was that kind of read for me.
There is no doubting Perkins’ writing ability, but there were so many
elements with this companion novel that didn’t work that it’s still a total
disappointment. I’ll probably read Isla And The Happily Ever After just
because I still have faith in this author, but I’m going to set my standards
way lower than they were with Lola. Hopefully I’ll be pleasantly surprised, but
at least I won’t be crushingly disappointed.
Lola And The Boy Next Door - 2 out of 5 stars
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